Before sending it to a proofreader, I may look into getting some online Beta-Readers for Asterion.  In particular, many of the characters are female, which as I’ve said before I don’t think really matters a great deal since the stories have mostly dealing with issues like genetic-engineered psychopaths and underground labyrinths, rather than real issues specific to men or women. Still, I’d be interested in getting feedback particularly from female readers.