Tag: writing problems

coutelier: I have literally spent hours browsing the internet for tips on how to stay focused while writing.

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I want to rewrite the third part of my prologue and all of Chapter Four (as well as other little bits).  I want to insert a more fairy tale tone into some of it, and have Tenley more taken in …

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‘Kaya and Sayuri froze, but Madame Lumina had had just about enough of this nonsense.’ Yeah… that sentence looks a bit awkward to me. It’s the ‘had had’, although it is something people would say it kind of looks odd …

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