I want to rewrite the third part of my prologue and all of Chapter Four (as well as other little bits).  I want to insert a more fairy tale tone into some of it, and have Tenley more taken in by The Queen – but no, I should finish the entire draft first then make changes.

Like I’ve mentioned before, choice later in the story are likely to impact what I want to show there, so at the moment are sections of the story that are more or less just placeholders until I get back to them. It nags at me though.

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